1st draft.

"how quick a mind can change with its own self analysis. Your opinions and feelings switch on a dime when they snicker and poke fun. Oh don't get me wrong its all okay when peers give you a hard time but at some point we all need to grow up and make our own decisions. What do we like to eat, wear, do , and see. Its all your own choice and sometimes you cannot let it be decided by someone else's opinion or, more importantly, your own strange view of what you want your life to be like. The things you may think are good for you or what you want can create a tunnel vision that blocks out what could become good. We are all subject to this ideal world where we have something we want and we will eventually get exactly that or get something damn close. its not true and it wont happen for most. Wake up, look in the mirror, forget fairy tales, take a deep breath and step out of your door with an open view on what your life could be like. Take chances, ignore first impressions, learn about yourself. it might work out for you. who knows."